thespacemonkey's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plan A | Subtitles]

Sterling effort

That was a decent flash, it wasn't really my humor, and there were a few technical issues, but only one major one, but its nice to see a flash with a decent narritive on newgrounds. Firstly, the technical problem, the first half of the animation had dire sound quality, and then about half way through (after the training sequence) the sound just stopped completely. Secondly, my advise, I know you made this in the South Park style, but you sould really try to develop your own, it was a bit too South Park really, but I suppose its good to plauy safe sometimes, and secondly I think that some of the sequences could have been better, for example the training sequence (which I must say I liked) should have had a more cleche soundtrack, Eye of the Tiger or something, I like Daft Punk, but when doing a satire its best to stick to the oldies. I also think that barring the end joke, all of your jokes were mis timed or too predictable. Though don't get me wrong I liked it alot, and I think that you could make some very good flash in the future... Provided you get your own style and work that little bit harder on the script. Keep it up!

stickists responds:

well lets hope there are no glitches in the next one and lets hope you like it more

[Bored with Timmy Episode4]

This is like a badd Odd Todd animation

Suspicially similar to Odd Todd animations, just not nearly as funny, and you pronounce mon-ay differently

[Black and White town]

Excelent

I really enjoyed that, and I thought your music selection was fantastic, I wish all people on new grounds put as much work into their movies as you did, the only drawback was the sudden cut of music at the end, I felt that that jarred with the overall rather dreamy rest of the animation, but its nothing to complain about really. Keep up the good work, I'll be looking out for your next project.

[White Clay]

Well done

That was a very good job, and I enjoyed it alot, suprisingly smooth animation, be proud of this one.

[Shades of Grey Ep. 3]

Trails off

I've watched and reviewed the previous two in the series, and this one was definately more accomplished, aided by the fact that you have put more work into the backgrounds (at the start of the movie at least) but that soon trailed off, and I thought that the mushroom people really didn't fit with the style, I felt that it would be much better if they were evil looking goblin type things, rather than slightly cutsie funghi, although admitedly mushrooms are easier to draw... I also felt that the interior backgrounds looked slightly rushed as opposed to the beautifully atmospheric outdoor shots, and finally I thought that the main character (as he does in the other episodes in the series) looks rather stiff, thats because of the program you used to draw him, I dont really know how you can get round that, short of drawing him frame by frame by hand, and I don't blame you for not wanting to do that, but it would be nice if you try to loosen him up a bit. Overall though it was a very solid flash that builds on the previos ones, and surpasses them, and I'm only really concentrating on the negatives in this movie, which arn't massive, but it would make such a massive difference if they wern't there. I'll be looking out for episode 4. Keep up the good work

SirGaryColeman responds:

Thanks for the review, I'll keep all of that in mind.

[There she is!!!]

Sublime

I saw this flash a while back on albinoblacksheep, and I absoloutely love it, and I spent many an hour looking through your site for other things, though my Korean isn't quite what it could be, but that didn't stop me trying damnit, though taht was a while ago, and on your forums you said you were going to translate, so it might be all good now, anyway I look forward to new flash from you, as I have been for a vry long time now.

[The 5 Shades of Red]

Good job

I really enjoyed that, obviously due to the nature of it i enjoyed some more than others (special contratulations goes to ZekeySpaceyLizard, I thought he created the best flash) but overall a good job, and I thought it was consistantly better than Green. Well done guys!

[The Takamori Legend]

That was practically faultless

I don't feel like I can critise that much, the only minor, and I mean MINOR problem with that flash was that there was a slight inconsistancy in the drawing, but really nothing of any real significance, and I only mention it because I can't find anything else to flaw the movie on. It looked very professional, and despite being a very cleche story I was still very gripped. Seriously, amazing. I am in awe.