It was good but...
I think that it was a nice idea, and very stylised, to me though it just felt a little soul less. You are obviously very good with 3D work, but you dont seem to be quite as high a level at flash itself, don't get me wrong, I'm not saying you're bad at flash, but you used the program just to squish a load of 3D characters in. It should have been a very good flash, the mood was right, the style was good, but it just didn't quite have the charm or heart for me. A good job none the less though, and I feel I'm dwelling too much on very much personal problems with it. Keep trying, I'm sure that someone with your obvious talent is soon to nail it eventually.